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All around me,
Falling down,
My world is crumbling

Family,
Once strong,
Now fighting like rabid dogs

Afflictions,
Changing us,
Changing who we are

Tears,
No longer flow,
I can't cry over this anymore

Emotions,
Running high,
Complicating everything

Bonds,
Once strong,
Shattered beyond recognition
The name is not so much a name as it is a description. This has no title, nor do I desire for it to have one. Also, it would be appreciated if critique is not included in any comments that may be made. This is one hundred percent emotion. I did no edits to this. What you see is what I thought.

I drew inspiration for this from goings on in my real life since May. It's been finished for about a month, but I haven't really been, for lack of better words, inspired to post this until today. Also, I won't go into details about my inspiration source, as they are deeply personal, familial matters.

Comments are appreciated, though.

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peteiswhatweaimfor's avatar
good work young son...